Score: 4

"Just one question"

submission: The story of a stalker

date: June 19, 2005

How do you get the door to open the wrong way round?

Is it some kind of magic door?

Not too bad an effort, but maybe more of a plot would have worked better.

Score: 5

"Worst sound ever!"

submission: Mario Bros 2

date: April 23, 2005

Other than that is pretty good.

But why doesnt Mario go into the castle at the end of the level?

Or in fact anything happen at the end of the level.

Fix this and sort the music out and stick a few more levels and u'll have urself a not bad game.

Score: 4

"Ok"

submission: Captain Bubble

date: April 21, 2005

But the collision detection as has been previously mentioned did somewhat suck.

If you make another similar game make the character not round. This is where much of your problem lies, With a round character you can't judge what the difference between falling off a ledge or not being close enough to the edge to make a jump is. Same with colliding with enemies, often the bubble bursts no-where near the enemies/hazards.

Other than that it's not a bad effort.

Keep it up and next time just spend a bit more time fine tuning it.

Score: 8

"Pretty good indeed"

submission: Pacman: Enmity

date: March 1, 2005

Nicely done, captured the style well. The bonus ending: classic!

Only one complaint and i find myself making it fairly often. Clicking on text as buttons. Work of a moment to put the hit area as a rectangle about the text instead of having to faff about to click on the actual words themselves.

Other than that, continue the good work.

Score: 4

"The computrer so is not smart!"

submission: X-Treme Tic-Tac-Toe

date: February 28, 2005

Sure it blocks you whenever you have two in a row.

But whenever it does its next move is random. So you have a fair chance of winning.

Fix this and u'll have a decent game. However it is only noughts and crosses and i don't know but i dare say theres millions of versions of that on NG. To make youurs stand out u'll bneed to add some kind of gimmick of thing to make it different form every other generic version.

Score: 10

"This is amazing"

submission: Flash to the Future

date: November 29, 2004

I really can't understand why this doesnt have a much higher score. You really can animate. A classic retelling of one of the best films and certainly, (minus the 3rd one which was a little lame in places), one of the best trilogies ever made.

The lack of voices, which most people ruin movies on here by and the 2D paper style whcih most of the negative views seem to be about, are the style of the movie and personally i thing it is great that way!

Can't wait to see 2 and 3!!

Score: 3

"I've got nothing against these types of flash but."

submission: Beginners Flash Tutorial

date: November 16, 2004

I really thing that this content does not need to be in a movie. If the tutorial has animation illustrating what it is talking about than that is fine. However this reads just like any old guide i could find on a website, and thats where it should stay!

If you are going to make a guide into a movie then put some "movie" like things into it otherwise don't bother!

Score: 7

"Good stuff"

submission: Falamew: Episode 2

date: November 3, 2004

"You're the saviour! You are one of a number of people who have helped keep this entry in the Portal! "

And i'd do it all again! Really good job, keep the good stuff coming.

Score: 3

"Hmm, this could have been so much better"

submission: Poke Porn (game)

date: October 19, 2004

The general idea of the game was fair enough.

However you have really let yourself down on the content.

Gameplay fair enough. But the images, rubbish, the name, rubbish, porn, why oh why? Before this game can "OWN" anything it needs to actually be decent!

Score: 6

"Nice idea, but annoying buttons."

submission: djkhrio;sn o;bohbvs;dljkf

date: January 21, 2003

Its a nice idea, however the buttons just being the actual text makes it very annoying to try and press them.

I've noticed this quite a bit. When making buttons in future its better to set the hit area to a rectangle around the text to get rid of all the fiddling about trying to click on them.

Some sounds as well would be a nice touch, and maybe a better reward.........